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Divyabhatia53
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Insomnia is a common disease like cough and cold nowadays. And most of the Indians keep on ignoring this deadly disease. It is a slow and straight path to death. This disease has many treatments but not a single person all over the world cured till now. It happens because of work burden with sleepless nights, anxiety, depression, headache, and many more brainy diseases. Working late at night for good earning for giving a happy life to a family is a very common problem in middle-class families now a day, taking stress, loneliness, leads to insomnia. It is come and go disease and for small-time is called acute and for long terms is called chronicle. In simple words, it’s just a sleeping disorder, maybe that’s why people generally ignore this deadly disease. But a very common symptom of this disease is it leads to 3 nights a week for 3 months or more in the case of chronic mode but in acute mode, it leads to one night to a few weeks.
Its treatments lead to different therapy by expertise is taking natural light daily mentally relief your brain, cognitive behavioral therapy has become more helpful for many people. As it helps to relieve stress psychologically, helps to erase negative thoughts from the mind, and balances the behavior and emotional responses. Patients of these types of disease have to take regular meditation of antidepressants and keep making friends and spend more and more time with family.

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Hello Divya, I have modified your paragraph and structured the content to show you how an article should be actually written. Hope this will help you move forward on your writer’s journey.

Main Article Title: Is Insomnia Deadly Than Coronavirus?  (need to write an effective and calling title)

Summary: While coronavirus kills within a span of weeks, insomnia is something which is very fatal but often ignored. It is a lifestyle disorder and impacts the overall health of an individual. Let us try to find what causes insomnia and how to prevent it. (need to write a summary that arouses interest in the reader to read your article further. A summary is also called metadata)(In the first three sentences try to ask questions from your reader and help or guide them. Or you can also start with an anecdote. In the introduction, you need to add the ending of the story in a way that you are not opening up the complete climax so that your reader is actually sticking to your article)

Introduction: Are you unable to sleep through the night? Since how long this has been happening? Have you got yourself evaluated by a sleep specialist? If not, please get it done as you may be suffering from insomnia, which in layman terms is called “inability to sleep”. The current inactive lifestyle and stressful conditions have given birth to this slow but deadly disease. It has become common just like cough and cold…..

Level Heading Examples:

Do you have Insomnia?

Signs and Symptoms

Prevention and Cure

Add a touching story to help your readers relate to your content on a personal level.

Conclusion: You will sum up all the things that you have covered in the article and then you will add a call to action.

Rajinder Soni, CEO
Digital Writopreneurs Hub
LinkedIn: https://www.linkedin.com/in/rajindersoni/


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